Emily Smail

There are some audio malfunctions in my second cut as in the school scene between Chloe and Lucy, there is no sound. I realised that this was because there was an imbalnce in the audio. My teachers and peers have given me some feedback that Lucy does not seem paraniod enough. So ontop of editting more, I must find out a way of trying to portray her as being more paraniod. Also, my film only reaches 4.58 minutes instead of the 5 minutes it must be.